The sun came out like ever before
Like dreams of mine in between the clouds
Like hide and seek when I sleep
Like bubbles of rain in winters.
I remember –
The sun looked calm and stunning in the morning.
During the noon, she was a bit annoying
But her tender touch waved a warm layer on my back.
And by evening as usual
She wanted to go.
The moist breeze helped her sleep.
She vanished in between two dark threads
Today darkness looks more dark and cruel
As if some painter has overdone his painting
I am not able to search the stars too,
Someone has hidden them in his palm.
The scarlet blood has made the sky look ugly.
The sun is lost among the dead bodies
Now its just darkness,
Someone's dark and an ugly painting
A worthless and a bloody painting.
5 comments:
Hi Paras...
The poem is wonderful but I sensed something ended badly. Written in a different mood.. good one..
Deepa
i was not being able to place it at first..but later..when u related it to the facts...i really felt the depth of it..!!! amazing..!!
"WOW", as always......
Was glad to meet the poet too :-). Kip writing!!!!
Who is this "She" you are referrin to? I always thought Sun is addressed as "He" & moon "She". Correct me if I'm wrong.
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